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He and She

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A boy with a beautiful heart
Saw more than met the eye.
He liked her from the start,
She could tell by

The way he smiled at her,
And she couldn't not smile back,
And when he left, oh never
Did she know that she'd turn black.

She didn't know that she
Could long for him that way,
And didn't know that he
Would be hers later that day.

But now she's scared of him--
Of the possibility
Of his smiling eyes becoming grim,
For he may love her more than she

Can ever love at all.
Didn't take a long time to write, but I'm quite happy with how it turned out :)
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Ziruzadat's avatar
I like it . but maybe you could explore more the metric and rhyme .

Sometimes losing time on structure helps finding new deeper things inside the original idea, isn't it?